There is no teenage male on the face of the planet who would say "Hold it, boys!" to his friends. It sounds like Lois's dialogue, not Chip's. Bad writing, that.
Sunday, April 26, 2009
Hi and Lois: Hold it, boys!
There is no teenage male on the face of the planet who would say "Hold it, boys!" to his friends. It sounds like Lois's dialogue, not Chip's. Bad writing, that.
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Hi and Lois
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